noice
What you've done here is a mastery of something I've been trying to do for a while now. Incorporation of that what-kind-of-sounds-like-a-distorted-
guitar is great, and it really works here.
My only problem with it is that I wanted it to get much faster while keeping down on the cluttered layered sounds. It did get to a nice speed for itself, and the sound isn't TOO cluttered, but at one part you do have a lot going on. People don't generally like that, but I do it all the time, anyway. It works here.
It's a great piece overall, and I like it a lot.